My Sunday Poem … #23

My Sunday Poem … #23

Some weeks ago I published a two verse poem on here called At Turnebyry in Starlight. It was inspired by the current debate over Scottish Independence. Seeming incomplete, I have since lengthened the poem to five verses. It can be set to the ancient tune of Slane, as in the hymn ‘Be Thou My Vision’. Hopefully it will journey far and wide. Scotland will prevail, independent or no. May hope always dwell in peaceful hearts.

At Turnebyry in Starlight

At Turnebyry in starlight a warrior stood,
A King for all Scotland, a soldier for good.
With eyes looking landwards, his thoughts they did turn
To Freedom won dearly at yon Bannockburn.

Would I have the courage to stand in his stead,
Where hundreds have fallen and thousands have bled.
Heart of my own heart, whatever befall,
Fair Caledonia, the bravest of all.

The pipes they are calling to the beat o the drum,
Play on with your music, play on til I’m done.
My spirit is steadfast, my way it is sure,
With friends close beside me and heroes afore.

Tho’ streams they may wander and wind without care,
No borders are broken that love won’t repair.
My harbour my haven my anchor my hold,
No stranger forsaken, no creed left untold.

So sing ye of glory from mountain to glen,
Raise high every banner o Scotland again.
The hope of our Nation, forever to see,
Scotland our homeland, united and free.

C.M.White 2017

(Turnbyry is the ancient name for Turnberry)

  1. The ‘warrior’ is Robert the Bruce. He was born at Turnnberry Castle in 1274 and rose to become the King of Scotland. I imagined him returning to his childhood home some time after his victory at Bannockburn.
  2. The ‘streams’ refers to a stream that flows close by my cottage known locally as the Milton Wynd. It flows down to the sea from here. At low tide it cuts across Turnberry Beach and you have to cross it to reach the sea. At high tide it is covered and becomes one with the sea. Either way, it is always there.
  3. The 3rd line of the second verse is taken from Be Thou My Vision. It just seemed to be asking to go there.

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27 responses to “My Sunday Poem … #23

  1. I had to come back and re-read this, actually I need to print it out. Such a great poem.

    • You are very kind. I am sending it to several musicians who are independence supporters so hopefully the words will travel. Have a great week ahead. All the best. Chris.

  2. As a Scot by choice, having lived there for8 years and loved it and it’s people I think your poem is great. Thanks for penning it and sharing it.

  3. Being Irish, I can recognise the patriotic fervour in your poem, a stirring ode.

  4. Oh Chris this is wonderful. Will reblog and post on FB and message to my Scot family!

  5. Reblogged this on bridgesburning and commented:
    I hope this will be reblogged by all who can. Thank you Chris White

  6. Beautiful verse, enjoyed Reading it ☺

  7. Powerful and skilfully written. Well done. And glad you gave credit to Be Thou My Vision. TS Elliott liberally borrowed from Dame Julian, and never did!

    • Hi there Cynthia. Thank you so much for your very kind comment. It is really appreciated. And I agree with you. It’s so important to give credit. Chris.🌞😀🍻

  8. Beautiful poem with Scottish rhythms. I have Scottish ancestors so I hear the pipes playing!

  9. Hey! Loved this poem, would you check out https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/08/25/poetry-with-deveaux-fraiser-cracked/
    This guy is a amazing poet and I’d love for you to see his work

    • Hi Tanya. Sorry I didn’t reply sooner but your comment was in my spam.
      Haven’t a clue why it would end up there. I will certainly look at his work.
      Always good to see you here as well. I’ll just go and visit you now,as well.
      All the very best. Chris.

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