my sunday poem … # 7
This week’s offering is a poem called The Ghost, first published in 1978 when I was living in Norfolk. A ghost is traditionally perceived to be the soul or spirit of a dead person that can appear, in visible form or other manifestation, to the living. If there are indeed such entities as ghosts I have a feeling that they would be walking in fear and desperate confusion among us in our material world. So I wrote this.
the ghost
visible world
haunting me still
a chill to my soul
ice-cold fear
like a spinning diamond
in the floating past
pain without pain
the children of time
are lost in the rain
feeling their eyes
and knowing their touch
my unseen presence flees
among life incarnate
the dark grief
that brought me here
and the priestly silence
that finally began
this restless sleep
this endless deep
o I am shapeless
and forgotten
death took me like a lover
and left me as a sailor
a voyager for ever
on the tide’s eternal drift
Awesome post! Love it!
You are very kind. Thank you.
You are welcome!!
Nice work! Walking anywhere in East Anglia on a dark and misty night can stimulate those creative brain cells! There is something about the flat terrain, marshlands, the sounds of trickling water, a distant crow, and those of unknown origin, that can make ones hair stand on end on a dark and misty night!.
Thanks very much.I actually lived in Swaffham which had more than its fair share of weird entities, mostly alive and well though. All the very best to you both.
Wow, Kris, I don’t know how a ghost feels. But what you wrote in your poem feels like this desperate cry for salvation.
I think you may be correct, Erika. All the very best. Kris.
Have a great day 🙂
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This really is very good indeed.
Thanks PG. Is it OK to call you PG, PG ?
It is scarey but not scarey. Have a lovely authorly week.😀
Please do call me whatever you wish! My actual name is Lucy but whatever feels comfortable. I did think it was a bit scary, in fact. I won’t be reading it with the lights off, that’s for sure. But then I can’t see in the dark anyway. Hope you have a super week too!
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Yep, that will do! 😉
This one would be perfect for this week’s Daily Post photo challenge – I don’t know if you’ve ever taken part but I find it a lot of fun.
No i haven’t as yet. May well do. 😀